Monday, June 05, 2006

Writing(?) Rant

I am sure most of you will agree with me when I say that in the literary world back home, this phenomenon of young, desi women (both NRIs and RNIs) coming out with books is completely out of control. Almost every other day, one hears of new offerings from these "remarkably talented" women who seem to be blessed with "insights" that escape us mere mortals. They are everywhere - in the newspapers, on TV and worst of all, in bookstores. Ludwig commented here and I can't help agreeing (based on my last vist home) that "it has become vitually impossible to go to a bookstore and browse decently, one is assualted by a phalanx of "new Indian writing" every single time". To be fair, yes, we find male writers too but A) Chetan Bhagat is marketed as Chetan Bhagat, and not as the next Rushdie. And B) Unlike every other female friend I have, every other man I know is not working on a book. So I will risk the generalization/anecdotal evidence charges and restrict this post to the writers of the fairer sex.

Here then, dear reader, I offer you a beginner's guide on how to write one of these books..err..things. Yes, I did read one such thing. Just one, you ask? Well, two to be accurate. All in the interests of patriotism and supporting upcoming writers, I assure you. Not to mention, altruism. I read them because you don't have to. How nice of me!

Begin Internalization
Before I begin, I should really say here that I do not direct these remarks against the miniscule army of talented Indian women writers who I read and admire, but merely against that particular hardcore who seem to equate ignorance with charm, condescension with caring, and stringing together random words with writing.
End Internalization

1. Setting: It was all well in 1995 to write about cross cultural displacement and such but as we all know this is 2006. Everything that's to be written about those things have already been written. So the settings and ideas that you could relate to - upper middle class upbringing, big cities, displacement, existential angst, masturbating civil servants are all out. Instead pick something that you are utterly clueless about - how about a small town in Kerala? Oh wait, that's been done before. How about a small town in Maharashtra? Better still, how about a village in Bihar? Yes, that is it. A village in Bihar is where our story will be set. Does it matter that you have never been to a village, let alone one north of the Vindhyas? Of course not. You are writing a book dammit, not saving the world.

2. Writing: Now that we have a background, time to start writing. In our first chapter we will describe our Bihar village. Don't fret, I have a five point formula on how to do the actual writing. This is what you do:

- Open Websters. If you don't own it, now would be a good time to go buy.
- Find random 50 words that is not used in common speech.
- Write them all down one after another.
- Write two foreign phrases like "c'est la vie" or "sine qua non".
- Insert proper nouns and prepositions in between these 52 words.

Viola, your first chapter is done. Now for the remaining twenty-four.

3. Research: To get to the story, something has to happen in this village. But what? Look West, young woman, look West. There is Bollywood to the rescue.

- Think of all the movies from Sholay to Swades which were set in villages.
- Go borrow all of them from the neighborhood video library / Indian store.
- Watch one a day for the next month.

Your research is complete. You can now proceed to the story. Before we move on, one thing to remember: Make sure the movies you are watching are scripted and made in Bollywood. In other words, don't even dream of watching Pather Panchali. It could destroy your book.

4. Story: Write down all the cliches that you saw in the movies. Add more cliches that you have read in similar books. Insert all of these at appropriate places in the book. Cliche 708, the one about the evil priest at the village temple? Yes. Cliche 2051 - the villain walks around with 35 bodyguards and looks like he just stepped out of a Ram Gopal Verma movie? No, why not? Add it in right now. (Since this is a free guide, I cannot give you a checklist, no. I will soon roll out a paid service which will include a listing of 13201 cliches. Send me an email if you are interested.)

5. Market: Always always always keep the foreign audience in mind. This point can not be stressed enough. Remember this is where the money is. So my dear young woman, now is a good time to sell exotic India. Here's a free checklist of things to put in:

- Elephants
- Monkeys
- Cows
- Priests
- Untouchability
- Abuse
- Dowry
- Child marriage
- Singing in the rain
- Mangoes
- Snakecharmers are OUT. They are not in vogue. Take them out.

6. Action: How much action can happen in a small, Bihar village? Time to move to the cities. Pick five random cities. Set the next five chapters in these five cities. Villains and heroes galore. A Bollywood style finale in which the heroes beat up the villains right before the police arrive. Cut to years later showing happy family in village with kid named after a friend killed by the villain. End.

Please note: All conversations in these cities will have accents. Of course, our heroes from our little Bihar village speak the Queen's English which is why they find these accents very confusing.

7. Title: The key here is to pick something not too obvious. Don't you see people making fun of titles with "spices" and "mangoes" in them? But it cannot be vanilla plain either. The common misconception is to think that the title should have something to do with the book that you just wrote. Not at all. Pick a title that sounds deep and then go back to the book and insert words from the title in every chapter. See, that was easy. (Yeah okay, I do have a list of titles but I am not going to give them away for free. No Sir.)

All done? What are you waiting for? Go publish it. Sell it as an insightful story about the realities of human life, a triumph of the human spirit or some such thing. Feel happy. Rest. Get some sleep. You have contributed to the betterment of society and in the process, mananged to produce a work of art. What more can one ask for?


gawker said...

good lord that was one of the funniest things I've read in a while.

Firstly, I would like to receive a list of the 13201 cliches in pdf format since I wish to write a book as an Indian woman. thank you please.

Secondly, you forgot to mention that the picture on the cover page should, as a rule, showcase henna covered palms.

Thirdly, you called it a work of art.

Veena said...

Gawker: Thanks. And great work on that hafta thing!

1. As soon as I receive your check for $13201. A dollar for each point is not so bad eh? For you, discount of $1 off the total.

2. I did though I think nowadays people are moving away from henna covered palms. They seem to have become all cool and are more into abstract Dali type art which needless to say has nothing to do with the book.

3. So now I have to explain to you, of all the bloggers in the world you what sarcasm is?

Falstaff said...

:-). Dammit, I knew watching Pather Panchali four times was a mistake. No wonder I can't write. You couldn't have mentioned this earlier? And what about this whole 'being a woman' thing? What's the point of telling me now?

Veena said...

Falstaff: Good. At least now we all realize you can't write. Reading your blog no one would have known :)

This women thing is totally true btw. I did some Excelgiri and applied weights and stuff - like you were actually equivalent to 3.4 women writer-friends. And yet the number of women who I know writing books won by a comfortable margin.

meditativerose said...

btw, I have a weird question ... have you shown this to me, or posted this before? major deja vu happening ...

The Black Mamba said...
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Falstaff said...

3.4 women writer friends. Ooooh! All at once? Or one at a time?

The Black Mamba said...

now now... what have you gone and done. did you really have to tell the other half what the business of writing was all about?

And this means, you cannot whine (for hours) about this *&#$!&@!# new indian author you spent some money on.

MR, think this was one of those mysterious disappearing posts in its previous incarnation ... or I am thinking of the identical twin lost in a mela here... hmm..cliches... where would you be without them. :)

good stuff.

zedzded said...


I'm all in favor of keeping dangerous weapons out of the hands of fools. Let's start with typewriters.
- Frank Lloyd Wright

Veena said...

MR: Yeah, some kumbh mela effect happened.

Falstaff: Whatever you prefer. Its your funeral after all.

BM: Who said I spent money on such things?

ZedZed: Fools? What fools? :)

Sowmya said...

OMG that is all so true, but you must agree, you read a few books like that you feel like writing a book yourself. that kind of 'inspiration'--cha cha very hard to find.

Veena said...

Sowmya: I don't know about writing a book, but I see your point. Reading a book like this makes me feel all happy about my superior writing talent. :)

shub said...

hehehe..perfect :D


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